How do I know what I’ve written will make breeders want me on their list? I have friends who are willing to read what I wrote, but they aren’t breeders so I’m not sure if other than making sure it makes sense and has no grammatical errors that they can really help. I tried to search the forum for more examples of what breeders want . . . Maybe I’m typing in the wrong thing? If anyone could advise me on this or is willing to read my rough draft that would be great. Thanks everyone. I know on one thread it said to include photos so I was thinking maybe some of these, a wedding photo with all three of us and I’m hoping to find the video of him walking through his baby gate.